Me, Myself and I

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In New Zealand there was a boy that loved to explore. He is 11 yrs old.

The boy wants to be an explorer but he is still in primary school.

One day the boy was sick of being told that he’s too young and weak to be a explorer.

Then he went to Rangitoto because Rangitoto is a volcano.

The boy read a nonfiction story that there was crystals and gems in a volcano.

Suddenly Rangitoto erupted.

Auckland, I liked how you used future tense.

Milan

Auckland, I liked the way you spelt everything correctly.

Joshua

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