WALT: Practising posting positive comments using google
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I am a 10 year old kid that likes to explore, I love to go on
adventures around the world so I know what is happening, but I have enmity issues like a vomiting volcano. I go on mystery adventures
when the sun is out. I love to explore around any volcano like Mount
Ruapehu.
Alyssa, I really like the way you wrote a simile describing the character
Falakika.
Hi Room 8, I like how you put onomatopoeia on you volcano practising your posting. I also like how you try to make the Lava realistic. from Timikara
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ReplyDeleteHi Fleur, I'm Carter from Wainui Beach School, Gisborne. I like how you put the BOOM in. Nice use of onomatopoeia. I found that a really cool touch to this artwork. I also liked the lava you had flowing down the volcano. This reminds me of the time I put a mentos in a bottle of coke and it erupted like a volcano. It got me sticky and made a huge mess. Anyway, that's all from me I hope to see more quality blog posts from you.
ReplyDeleteHi Fleur i'm Giacomo from Wainui Beach School,Gisborne. I like it how you put the lava spewing out.How long did it take you to make it? This was a very cool Blog Post. Giacomo
ReplyDeleteHi Fleur, I'm Daniel B from Wainui Beach School Gisborne. I like how you put the BOOM! at the top of the volcano. I also liked the lava flowing down the volcano. This reminds me of a photo of Mt Ruapehu when it was erupting.My Grandad took it. Anyway, that's all from me I hope to see more quality blog posts from you.
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Hi Fleur, Im Natalie, from Wainui Beach School And this blog remind me of when our class did this but it was our self portrait of our self. I like this blog post because you put lava on the side. Natalie
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